Gone.... but still there with you

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Gone.... but still there with you

The day I die is the day I start my new life.  Sadness and sorrow flows through the air as my past life sinks into the fertile soil deeper, and deep i go the closer i get to his hand my soul reaches out so he can take me to my rightful home.  Peace, love, faith.... all these things i feel.... such joy

Tho I am gone I am still with you do not weep everyday because my life was taken away.... you cannot sence my presence around you, you cant see me nor here me....

but i am there....

Always......


- Christopher A. Elam Jr.

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cheronld commented on Gone.... but still there with you

05-13-2010

nice poem....this one is for all the believers out there...I wish I was one...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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