gone.

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    gone.
    saddness dwells within mah soul...
    emptyness fills mah heart...
    happyness escapes mah grasp...
    the cold continues to linger in mah presence...
    the only thing i wished for...
    stolen away by the only person who could give it to me...
    a true smile

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    WordSlinger commented on gone.

    05-09-2009

    Very original, I like the dialect/lingo of mah So this is a mah good poem, I gave it a 9
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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