Gone?

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    just some things on my mind i guess...

    Gone?

    i watched you go under
    i watched you go down
    i was falling with you
    we were going together
    we are still falling
    and will remain that way
    well, until we strike a vain to deep
    when the blade goes against us
    and makes us bleed permanet
    for i fear that day
    but not as much as i long for it
    the feeling of floating and leaving the earth kind of excites me
    yet of my excitement, i am fearful
    afraid to leave the ones i love
    for they might do the same as me
    they may cry, and even more
    but this world is so hard, so difficult
    so, yes, i do look forward to the day
    where you and i will leave this place
    but also, i fear for the same reason

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    eddie14 commented on Gone?

    04-15-2010

    i thought the same way about going out of this world but i learned to let go and go on i hope to see you on the other side

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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