Up To You

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    Poem Commentary

    life is nuts and we need to take control

    Up To You

     nothiing ever changes
    same routine everyday
    ups and downs everywhere
    you see love thats true
    and thats not
    everywhere you turn there is murder
    people killing people
    people killing animals
    people killing themselves
    life is not what it seems to be
    everything is hard
    everything is strange
    so confusing
    so painful
    so...undescribable
    if you had the power to change it would you?
    i would
    so many things happened to me and my loved ones
    im tired of it
    life needs to start changing
    its up to us
    you in?
    or out?
    choose a side

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    eddie14 commented on Up To You

    04-15-2010

    this is so true i like this it was as though you were writing about my family lol
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Up To You

    04-13-2010

    This is real good,, and i am so in... things will change, i promise;(- the years will press on and this time will only be a memory
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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