Goodnight.

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I lost my sister (not my actual sister) when school ended. I have felt a guilt to forget to say to her, "Bye, have a nice life, I hope I bump into you again." Like I would've. But I wont. TT.TT

Goodnight.

Deep down I know the truth. The truth of who you are to me.
You loved me, when you yelled, I could feel the love warm around me,
like a midsummer's night, just waiting to never awake.

As I look into the whirlpool,
I never wish to be changed. You have made me the truthful person I am today. Though I may never see you again, See the true smile you place on your face from time to time, The truth only airs one hope. You were my friend, my sister, my little light, shining on the plateu of hardship, rekindling my hope whenever my sight fell on that light, I would splash and start to run again.

Deep down, when I bump into you, years from now, the river that we dug together inside of me, will run wet again. For now, it falls dry. Dryer than the dead. When nightfall comes, my dreams fall to you, to our laughs, to our frowns. Our fights compare nil to the sadness we felt on that last day.

Goodnight.

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openursoultome commented on Goodnight.

06-10-2009

:'( sad (crys for a good reason) ur poetic side is true and the 1st poem thingy that make me think about every moment i spent with my friends! ur gonna always gonan be my lil sis never for get that!

rainbowsarerare

06/11/2009

Well Thankya ^^

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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