Growing Love With You

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    The love shared between two people who commit to one another.

    Growing Love With You


    Petals of roses fall softly in the

    warm breeze of my thoughts of you.

    Branches of leafy green spread

    endlessly reaching out with life

    Deep set roots ground our love firmly

    Growing with you is prosperous,

    yielding lush fruit quenching soul.

    If you have it in you to love me, lay

    open your heart and let me come in.

    If you have it in you to forgive my

    distant ways, turn and take my hand.

    Within you are the seeds of growth,

    plant with me the fruit of hope.

    In spring time of our love we start

    a new, pulling weeds as we grow.

    The summer of our life blossoms with

    fruitfulness of our work if we are

    dedicated to our goal. Be with me

    this day, and all days ahead,

    wintering warmly in our garden of

    love.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    zaphnathpaaneah commented on Growing Love With You

    10-01-2009

    You have articulated how we should commit and share love in a captivating fashion. This piece is a lucid evidence of one who genuinely commits love. thank you so much for sharing. zaph

    graceladymn commented on Growing Love With You

    09-22-2009

    So warm as to pierce the heart with longing given and shared. Full of the fruits of quiet melodies that lift the best of life to the lips to drink deeply of the fountain of refreshment.

    keenperception

    09/22/2009

    Bless You for your giving way I am refreshed of faith that I can reach out into this world and find a sharing soul.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    keenperception’s Poems (8)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Knight of Everest Mountain 0
    Are You Trying To Make Me Stop Loving You? 2
    Days End......... 2
    After the Storm 0
    Starting Fresh Each New Day 1
    The Wilderness 2
    Growing Love With You 2
    God's Still in Command 0