The Wilderness

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The wilderness of my soul connects to the beauty in nature where I go daily to find peace from the life lived in the world! The trees, the animals, the air, moon and stars call out to me from where ever they are. One comes from the water, a beaver! Beaver tells me how to find my way, working hard, standing my ground, use any thing and every thing to build my nest, working together we acomplish more, compleating each task to get ahead! The beaver comes to tell me he's my friend!

I have a beaver here in the river behind where I live that comes to visit me in the evening just after the sun goes down. He has become to be my Totum and helps me want to explore our world even more!

The Wilderness


The wilderness is a place we've not yet understood.
With patience and perseverance one day we will find,
that just like God, the great beauty we see with our eyes and mind.
But the great mystery they both portray,
are but seen with the heart when we pray!
The newness of every day gives us hope that one day we will know;
that the wilderness inside you and me is where God wants to be,
exploring, conquering, setting each one free!
Explore with him, and journey on till this frontier ends;
for only then we can move on toward a new frontier!
Jesus God is our guide and friend,
as we walk alone through this wilderness of a life unknown.
Take his hand and tarry not,
follow to join him in the great wilderness of his heart
LOVE...
May we all find our way to this place in Grace!

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dancinghawk commented on The Wilderness

09-22-2009

Baker City! what a beautiful spot in the world ... thank you for this heartfelt post ... looks like the "busy beaver" energy is serving you well ... may Grace surround you always ... -dh

graceladymn commented on The Wilderness

09-22-2009

God is such an artist that uses perfection in designing the world to hold his favorite love of all, his people formed in his likeness, each with a distinct beingness and with unique gifts. We witness his beauty all around us each day and recall to us memories of our eternal home.

keenperception

09/22/2009

Amen, Blessed are those who let the spirit flow through thy heart and out through thy pen! Thank you friend for sharing with me; thy energy does flow for goodness and love!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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