Hear my Whisper

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    I originally posted this poem in this link: http://www.katext.com/Suitchiro09/blog/2844/
    but I think its not proper to that site so I think it's better to store it here.
    I'm still thinking if I need to post my other poems here.

    Hear my Whisper

    Just a second before, I came to realize

    And as I thought, only to make life concise

    Direct to me, you may not see

    But a track I see within me


    Nobles may not be recognized

    Unless came by, characterized

    So am I, may not be identified

    And somehow, somewhat, may be denied


    Hear you me, I pray and say.

    Give me a chance and let me stay.

    Even a second I can be

    Show you what, in your dreams you always see


    In the past, you used to see

    Person in disguise I may say, not me

    A savior of all your day

    And even a sailor who sails in your way


    Inside that disguise I cry

    And deep inside… I see up the sky

    Want to say to you, it’s like this

    It’s me… In reality it is.


    Oh God, where have you been?

    Hide my identity, I can’t be seen?

    Wind whirls and thunder roars

    My heart can no longer soar.


    As I end this poem I have to mention

    I am afraid, I’ll reveal in action

    A thing runs within me I can’t explain

    Strive to accept … only friendship… just maintain


    Deep inside my heart it says

    Within my mind it plays

    A word… should be known to you

    Just want to say “I Love You”

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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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