Heart Break

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  • Lost Love

    Heart Break

     Deep imbedded in my soul
    my emotions have lost all control
    you have driven my spirit down,into a dark cold numb place
    just around the corner where my heart use to lye
    the existence of my spirit you still deny
    I’m faced with death upon death in darkness clutches of hell

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    StandingBear commented on Heart Break

    05-30-2009

    Nicely written verses .. "The existence of my spirit you still deny" ___________________ Great write. 9
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    Serenityyoung

    06/02/2009

    Thanks for your comment cool bear

    WordSlinger commented on Heart Break

    05-30-2009

    wow, must've got hurt bigtime, I like this, lol I feel like this, lol, I run from and back to stuff like this, what a life?
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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