Heartbreak

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Heartbreak

Sadness            Swirling                       Crushing      Suffocating Me.         No way out                       Trapped.     Can't breathe,                       Mind racing,                                 Stomach heavy                All thanks to you.  No reason to live              No will to fight                             No reason to try to Live through another night.                                         I loved you                 You loved us both,      You picked her                        You left me               Alone. 

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Solaris commented on Heartbreak

07-09-2011

well done good expression very direct and to the point

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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