Lost Love

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Lost Love

Heart ripped open Blood flowing out.  Mind numb Stomach heavy  All emotion gone.  Never again.  You were my last,  My last chance for a happy ending.  Fate tore us apart; Tore my will for life too.  I'll pick up this razor Cut your memories from my mind.  Cut your touch off my skin.  Cut my love for you out of my heart, Heart ripped open, Blood flowing out.  Death. 

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TilMyLastBreath commented on Lost Love

06-25-2011

Wow very strong words for very strong emotions. You paint a very strong picture of pain (a broken Heart).

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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