HEAVEN

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    HEAVEN

    On the day that I died, my soul floated to the sky. I looked down, and saw everyone begin to cry. I didn't want to go, but I knew that I must.
    I felt no sadness or sorrow, not even lust. When I got to heaven, I
    didn't know what to do. I heard a voice behind me say, "I love you." When I turned around, I saw a man in white. He had a halo, and was surrounded by light. Held out his hand and said, "come with me."
    So I followed him to eternity. I followed him to a place, where people were free to roam. And I knew in an instant, that I was home.

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    butgadiana commented on HEAVEN

    06-25-2009

    I like how this was written....I have something similar to it....I'm really glad I registered for originalpoetry.com...

    organicchick commented on HEAVEN

    04-15-2009

    A really beautiful, hopeful poem......Nice flow to!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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