hello you

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  • Sadness
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  • Loss

    hello you

     you are here
    my greatest friend
    dont disapear
    on me again

    my dreams all melt
    and go down the drain
    but they leave me with scars
    they leave me with pain

    hello you
    goodbye me
    is this how
    its meant to be

    hello you
    take my hand
    walk with me
    through strange land

    hello you
    and goodbye
    leave me in peace
    to slowly die

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    Chaos128 commented on hello you

    09-16-2010

    I like the directness of "hello you". It tells (me) a mildly melancholy story of a dependence that won't let go. It's kind of like a sad little wind-chime.
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