Her Demise

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  • Sadness
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  • Death
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  • Loss
    • oddone
    • I apologize for the gruesome poems.Some are too much for even me to read anymore. I get depressed. Guess where the negative feeling goes?

    Her Demise

    Porcelain was her skin
    Her hair already too thin
    Parents sleep deprived
    Cause their baby girl's a little less alive
    Though they'll never know
    Long ago
    She had already died inside
    Psychic suicide
    They hold her as she cries
    Suffering and lost
    This is her demise

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    xslayer2x commented on Her Demise

    11-30-2010

    i dont think you should apologize. I think some of the saddest poems/music are also the most beautiful.
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    gregster commented on Her Demise

    11-25-2010

    whoa....all ur poems are subliminal..well nothing deeper than rap but sure is poetry,,great job
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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