hope

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hope

I watch the tides as it washes the shore,
as it gathers the water and goes back for more.
bringing with it debris and sand.
Now, why do i feel it relates to man?

It tells a tale of strength and courage.
Lashing aginst the rocks as if to give a message.
Pushing the water again and again,
then goes back for more enduring all pain

Oh! how I wish we can learn from the tides.
Sifting the rubble along its sides,
bearing the pain as it proceeds to its goal,
convinced that some day this life would leave its soul.


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sherry122 commented on hope

05-31-2009

Beautiful rhymes, I like your creativity with words and your beautiful thought. Very interesting how you made a poem out of the waves.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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