How can I think?

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    How can I think?

    How can I think of the Ocean
    When your murmur feels like a potion?
    How can I think of the Moon
    When it could blind me soon?
    How can I think of the Pole
    When you captured my sole?
    How can I think of the Sun
    When all the Fire begun?
    How can I think of the Air
    When I can't even inhale?
    How can I think of the Day
    When magic is here for today?
    How can I think of a Dove
    When I already have your love?

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    MrGee commented on How can I think?

    11-24-2009

    Very nice. the rhymn and meter are good. This is a very descriptive poem and paints a good picture in the mind of the reader. I especially like the final verse - How can I think of a Dove When I already have your love? without any hestitation I easiy rate this work a 10

    cgagos

    11/24/2009

    Thank you very much for your kind rating....as for every poet, the readers' feedback are extremely important and rewarding. My best regards.

    cgagos commented on How can I think?

    03-18-2009

    I would love to have some feedback.....thank you.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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