How could you?

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    How could you?
    you’ve missed nineteen years of my life
    And now you expect me to forgive you.
    How do I do that?
    Or should I even do that?
    Never once have you tried to find me
    And now that you are
    that’s suppose to make it all better?
    You’re wrong!
    You missed everything
    And that means nothing.
    How does that work?
    You were suppose to be there
    But you never were
    So now you have to get use to the fact that
    I’m not there whenever you want me to.
    Maybe now you will know how I have felt for nineteen years!
    Hopefully you’ll change
    But I doubt that after all this time!
    You go your way and ill go mine.
    Maybe we’ll meet again…
    But hopefully not!!!

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    Teardrops commented on How could you?

    05-31-2010

    I see and feel the pain . Maybe you should listen to what they have to say if its not a good reason then walk away Marie
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    cousinsoren commented on How could you?

    05-31-2010

    This poem needs a bit of structural editting, Ashley! I plan to discuss that in a Private Message (PM) with you. Very emphatic and fervent piece, almost perfect in diction, but a bit too vitriolic, though down-to-earth and unpretentious. Once again , you display that you possess a clear pseudo- prosaic or quasi-poetic style of writing poetry.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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