Who Will Cry?

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    Who Will Cry?
    Who will cry for the little girl
    Lost and all alone?
    Who will cry for the little girl
    Who longs to have a home?
    Who will cry for the little girl
    Sad and without a friend?
    Who will cry for the little girl
    Whose heart will not mend?
    So, who will cry for the little girl
    Lost and all alone?

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    Teardrops commented on Who Will Cry?

    05-31-2010

    great write and great flow it tells a all to true story in a few words thanks Marie
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    cousinsoren commented on Who Will Cry?

    05-31-2010

    This is so poignantly touching in its pliant simplicity. Ashley, you have correctly avoided flowery figures of speech in this soul- moving lament. You display a masterly and effective use of anaphoras in intensifying a series of (by no means rhetorical questions) questions that demand answers, in a too often callous and fearful world.
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    HarverTomsson commented on Who Will Cry?

    11-04-2009

    Almost perfect. Line eight could use one more beat. Use the preposition "with" instead of "for" and pity morphs into empathy. Ah! Decisions, decisions. You made a lot of good ones here.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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