I BEG YOU!!!!

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  • Confusion

    I BEG YOU!!!!

     What's happening? I'm a little confused,
    are these feelings true? Am i being used?

    Should i trust these thoughts that are in my head?
    and should i believe ~ my heart is not dead?

    Can i trust you with all that i want and need?
    can you break down these walls of stone and succeed?

    Can u trust i won't hurt you and i'll overcome,
    all the damage before you that has been done.

    My hearts in your hands ~ Please do not drop it,
    if your playing games ~ I beg you to stop it!!!

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    ForEverLuv commented on I BEG YOU!!!!

    05-28-2009

    Well written. The ideas of being alone and also sharing your heart in one poem was very enjoyable reading. You keep writing and I will keep reading.
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    ianraiseland commented on I BEG YOU!!!!

    05-27-2009

    its honest. i like that. not everyone can open themselves to true submision and scrutany. . . i'll be looking at mor of your stuff.
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    cherlemarie commented on I BEG YOU!!!!

    05-27-2009

    All though I'm not in the love zone in this stage of my life, I can relate to the poem. I like it.
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    GeoffreyMalloy commented on I BEG YOU!!!!

    05-25-2009

    This was quite the poem, especially for it's content. Truth and desire in one motion. I like your work.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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