I DON'T WANT THE FAME

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    I DON'T WANT THE FAME

         No place to call home, a nomad destined, forever to roam;
    Run, run, run!  No where to hide.  Lost, mired down in grief;
    Because no one wants to accept you for who you've become;

    But a false legacy built to get you killed.  Hated because you survived
    a 40 year old plot;

    Despied becuase you can never do right, the cross game at its finest;

    Your body cold and shivering like muscle spasms, like a crying child sniveling, frightened to death.

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    dumplin commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    10-06-2009

    just a couple of misspellings, but very good. Hope to read more of yours.
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    CatsMeow commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    09-12-2009

    A pungent satire that could be expanded in essence of the plot. What is your central or primary audience?
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    miredidi49 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-28-2009

    Nice poem, just keep up with the spelling, very important in writing.
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    blindmaster

    07/28/2009

    Will do. Thanks for the comment

    Dreamer123 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-25-2009

    this is so emotional this is great keep up the great work blindmaster. you rock. and there's a spelling error on the line "despied " you spelled because wrong but no worries you still rock. :D God Bless.
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    blindmaster

    07/27/2009

    preciate the comment!

    Minerva22 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-15-2009

    I like this, but the title confused me, it just didn't seem to fit with the poem itself. Which is full of great lines, such as "hated because you survived a 40 year old plot".
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    blindmaster

    07/17/2009

    When your name is called out or is familiar with a lot of people it is almost as being a famous moviestar that is the reason for the shades you go 'hollywood' on they as when you not stutin nobody

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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