I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

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    I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

    By: Adam M. Snow

    I write with flowers of ink,
    thy love poured out on page,
    in a slumbering alder away in endless flight;
    swaying with the stars, so white 'gainst the black night sky.
    Facing the horizons, on the calm black waters called -ink.
    -I write for thee that thy heart be free.
    I have seen maelstroms eternal,
    mount in my soul but endless;
    -An abyss without thee, I dare thee not.
    By starlight the rushes lean over thee wide:
    -The ink on the page is erased,
    -The text is long forgotten.

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    jenifer commented on I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

    12-22-2013

    it's good but i would also like to see something more raw.
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    Tempestlady commented on I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

    07-30-2013

    Nice imagery and beautiful wording. Love your style and new perspective. Like the old English tone of the work and the idea of the passing of time. Write on ..................tempestlady
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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