I Hold On

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    I Hold On

    Uncertainty fills my mind
    Is it a crime
    To feel the way I do
    When I am so close to you
    Is it a weakness
    That I fall for you
    There is a mystery in your eyes
    A soul inside that cries
    Despite my intuition
    For a priceless recognition
    I hold on
    I grow weaker everyday
    Growing fonder at this dismay
    Completely reckless
    I can no longer fight
    I hold on with all my might
    A glare upon the window
    Reflects something so typical
    The fear consumes me
    And gravity pulls me down
    But what is it that we have found
    Impartial to reality
    It messes up my memory
    Closes out my fantasy
    Guides me closer to the light
    Disappeared this cold and empty night
    Yet I hold on
    Furnished all my thoughts
    Remind me of my doubts
    Covered with inverted eyes
    But they can never realize
    What all this is to compromise
    My heart wanders to the past
    Given the chance at last
    Surfaced the resurrection of the past
    I find it hard to fight
    But everything you said was in spite
    And everything is trite
    So I turn out the light
    And walk in the shadows
    But still I hold on

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    astroplane commented on I Hold On

    03-09-2009

    solid :)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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