I Like Change!

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    I Like Change!




    Is it just me?
    Or did it change?
    Questions,
    Answers,
    That seem strange!
         

    Would you believe,
                                                  The word!
    Over what they say?
                                                    Concieve!
    To the day.
    What the message?
    Might be today!


    Sent in a vessal,

    Just picked for you!


    Why stand aside?

    Letting life,
    Pass you bye!
    Grow your wings!
    And Fly!

    That's JustME!
                                          

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    SuperChick76 commented on I Like Change!

    03-03-2010

    A very interesting view. I believe more people should few change in such a positive way. Beautifully written. Though the line "What the message?//Might be today!" seems a little incorrect. Do you mean write "what's the message?" Or "what the message,//Might be today?!" Not a big thing, and certainly has very little impact on the beauty of the poem, just... curious. Beautifully written. I really enjoyed the read. You should write more, you are a fine poet. :)
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    JustMe69

    03/03/2010

    well ty Super.......... The read was ment for how you see it... not as I wanted you to read it..... you got the message...........

    ThatGurl commented on I Like Change!

    03-02-2010

    Simple but I felt your point. Nice flow Good work. ThatGurl
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    JustMe69

    03/03/2010

    ty Gurl.... for reading my work......

    sammia commented on I Like Change!

    02-25-2010

    I like this. Love the flow and the layout of it. Let me know when you post more of your work I will be sure to come and read for you. Keep writing and sharing. ~Sam
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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