I Look Into Your Eyes

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    I Look Into Your Eyes
    I look into your eyes,

    So big and brown.

    I see the little boy,

    Hiding behind a frown.

    What can I do,

    To make you smile,

    What can I do,

    To keep you awhile.

    Is there an answer to such mystery?

    Why do we have to say goodbye to our history?

    I thought we'd have forever and a day,

    I hate this thing thats taking you away.

    Once you ran free and wild,

    Now I miss that little child.

    The one I looked up to,

    The one I always will.

    You taught me never to give up,

    Thats something you'd always instill.

    If only there was something I could do.

    If only this horrible fate were untrue.

    I look into your eyes,

    So big and brown,

    You're the best older brother,

    I could have ever found.

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    SavVySam commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    07-18-2009

    That was just beautifully written, good job! Your brother must be very proud of you as well! I enjoyed reading this very much-Thanks
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    UnworthyFather commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    06-14-2009

    Beautifully written!! Exquisite baring of the soul. I tell you, if I were your older brother, and this poem didn't get me to stay... a smile and a wink might have. Thanks for sharing. 10
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    carollynn1964 commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    03-04-2009

    Made me Tear up...
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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