I Love You

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    I Love You

     must i venture
    deep inside,
    lost in despair,
    thats my pride.


    must I  love you?
    I hate that word,
    please, can't i fight you
    no more to be heard.


    I cherish the days,
    long left behind.
    when no hatred,
    was yours, and mine



    I grasp for the stars,
    peering into darkness
    what do I see?
    so out of my mind


    a love transended
    across many years
    no longer in reach,
    I grasp for you dearly,



    I cannot let go!

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    dragynwynd commented on I Love You

    06-22-2009

    Very nicely done....I feel your pain....you make your point very well in very few words.....dragynwynd
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    p8alan

    06/23/2009

    Thank you that is nice to hear

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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