I Move You........

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This piece speaks to the power of a good man.
When a woman is dearly loved and respected, she is move to be the best woman, mother,friend, lover she can be. She can move not only mountains but also her man.

I Move You........

You can deny it because you just can't hide it.
I Move You

From the top of my head to the bottom of my toes
 I Move You

From my compassion so deep that no other can reach. To my brain so unique makes others feel incomplete.

From the swerve of my hips to my voluptuous full lips there's no way you can forget.

From my coco brown skin to my long legs and arms that consume all that you are.

No you can't deny it because you can't hide it.
I Move You

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soulwriter commented on I Move You........

11-23-2009

Yes you do - good job --- keep moving and expressing

infiniti

11/23/2009

Thanks Soulwriter for checking out my work and I hope u continue to read more. Infiniti

Hampton commented on I Move You........

11-23-2009

A slightly erotic write that speaks to ones featiures of attraction for another. Nice.

infiniti

11/23/2009

Thanks Hampton, I had fun writing this piece a few years ago.

JamilahAyanna commented on I Move You........

11-23-2009

Snaps to you I lyke da rhythm and the flow dat dis poem with-holds and u have such a beautiful confidence within urself....

infiniti

11/23/2009

Thanks I am glad that you like my work and I hope u continue read more. Ur friend in poetry, Infiniti

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

infiniti’s Poems (21)

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The Day After........
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5
Foolish One 5
Closer Then Any Other 4
I Move You........ 3
Come Too Me...... 3
Emotionally Detach...... 1
20 Words Challenge,,,,
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2
Other People's Hell....... 3
What Happened? 2
Love Out Of Sight 3
Peace From Within 3
Brown Tears....... 3
What's In A Kiss....... 2
The Strength Of A Man.......... 2
A Ray Of Light 3
Are You Sure...... 2
Tormented Souls 4
Impulsive Love 4
Verbal Poems..... 6
How Can He Give...... 2
With Grace 6