I pray; IM DYING

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    Everyone now and then has been betrayed by someone, its sad but true and opnce you've been let down you feel as if you should be dead. This poem states the truth. I hope you enjoy my writtings!
     
     
     
                           much love
                       *Tiffany*

    I pray; IM DYING
     Eyes swollen
    Heart at ache
    Stomach drops
    Mouth open
    In shock,
    I cry
    Tears flow down
    I drop to the ground
    Pray for this to be over
    Pray for my life
    Pray for me to die
    Pray for it to end
    I pray for you to come
     
    Like a bullet piercing my heart
    My throat dry
    Try to scream yet mute
    No sound at all just visions
    Hurry up Im cold
    Im laying on the floor
    Blood spills
    Ive been shot
     
    Shot by lies and betrayal
    Baby I gave you my all
    I gave you my heart
    You took it for granted and
    Killed me
    As I lay there I pray
    Pray for you to return
    Pray for my family
    Pray for my friends
    Pray for my love
    Pray for you
     
    My world was all you
    My dreams just you
    My life you
    Everything revolved around you
    Im cold and shaken
    My life flashes before my eyes
    You did this
    I cry now but you dont see
    Your not even here
    Do you care?
     
    Im praying for God to forgive you
    Pray for that love
    Pray for the pain to go
    Pray to dissapear
    Pray for the end of it all
    Pray for you to call
     
    Baby I pray for you
     
    You killed me yet Im still here
    Dead but with you
    My soul forever more
    Im the angel watching you
    Everyday I pray for you
     
    Baby I love you
     
     
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     .....), ---.(_(__) /
     ....// (..) ), ----"
     ...//___//
     ..//___//
     .//___// 

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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