I want to say good-bye when you die

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    I want to say good-bye when you die

     I want to say good-bye when you die
    sorrowful tears shall be dry (or drier)

    I want to say good-bye when you die
    ugly scares might be easier to hide (never easy)

    I want to say good-bye when you die
    so I can stop forever asking you why (no answer)

    I want to say good-bye when you die
    to ease your pains and close your eyes......

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    wheelsal commented on I want to say good-bye when you die

    06-29-2009

    Your experiences are so sad. I don't know what is for you or some one else but you say it well......
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    susanthewinner

    06/29/2009

    Thanks for reading, Wheelsal, I hope to write some bright and happy poems to cheer you up. Sorry for jerking tears from you.

    writingislove commented on I want to say good-bye when you die

    06-28-2009

    This was great. I love the very last stanza of this poem. It has come to me so many times and I always feel more of a closing if I say good bye when one dies.
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    rossmangeles commented on I want to say good-bye when you die

    06-20-2009

    Simply realistic. Saying hello is easier said and with a smile, but to say good-bye alwasy brings pain and sorrows. Great job!
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks, rossmangeles,keep reading and writing. Sincerely, Susan

    hbenitez commented on I want to say good-bye when you die

    06-15-2009

    Brillant job! You were able to encapulate the horrific farewell we at times give to someone who is at their final stages in this life. Although I believe in reincarnation and reject the notion of death one can't help feel pain when one travels to another dimension.
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    susanthewinner

    06/27/2009

    Thanks for your kind words and valuable advise. Read on, many more to come. Sincerely, Susan

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