I'd Eliminate You

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    I'd Eliminate You

    You never took from me,
    anything I wasn't willing to give away.

    I can't believe what you say,
    because I know I don't mean what I say to you.

    I wish I could reach out
    and unwind the hands of time.
    How far back would I go?
    What would I undo?

    Would I eliminate you?

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    Vincent commented on I'd Eliminate You

    12-16-2008

    Nice poem. Critique: It seemed void of detail, emoution and meter. I being constructive and honest, I hope you can appreciate honesty. smiles

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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