If Only...

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    If Only...

    If only people we know and come in contact with was more loving and more friendly.

    If only we as people could care for others and take other people feelings into consideration and not try to hurt other people by saying anything to hurt or put them down.

    If we just have more feelings for everyone and even our close family members and really let it show.

    If only people care and have more loving thoughts about everyone and even our close family members instead of having a frown on our face and hating and saying things about them to hurt each other.

    If only we as people could live in this big old world without the crime that's all around us.

    If only we as people could live without having bad thoughts and bad problems to worry about.

    If only this big old world could be different...

    If only people just try a little harder at their part and accept Jesus Christ as their Savior and pray everyday it could be better.

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    Abigail077811 commented on If Only...

    08-28-2009

    i luv this poem its so nice n beautiful but mostly all true.... if only if only thts wat my mom always says she says if only the economy was better or if every1 was there 4 one another 2 help and 2 care if only

    bettybop200741

    08/28/2009

    I actually wrote this poem in high school yrs. ago. But when i typing it up, I change some of the wording in it. I have seen alot and been through alot in my lifetime and i am just 43. Thank you reading it and telling me how you feel. God bless and take care.

    Ray37342 commented on If Only...

    08-27-2009

    Very good point, as I tell everyone, everybody has their own ways of writing. To me, honestly, the lines are a mouth full, kind of long. In the second line, about "care for others and take other people" the other people to me sounds better as other people's, but I'm not a english major lol. All in all, I give a 7.

    bettybop200741

    09/05/2009

    Thank you. You gave me good points and again thank you. I like writing down how I feel I wrote something about my stilborn several years ago. Some people told me I should try to get them publish but i just hadn't. Again thank.

    teasasue commented on If Only...

    08-27-2009

    very good and very truly spoken. I like this poem thank you for sharing.

    bettybop200741

    08/27/2009

    Thank you. I'm glad youenjoy it.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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