I'm Back

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this for my poetic partner in crime

I'm Back

Message after message

me blowing you kisses

wishing you was here

So I can show you a real man

what your life has been missing

I signed back up for op.com

Because I felt apart of me is missing

my thoughts thru poetry

and that person who always listen

I felt she was straying away

from the lack of attention

I be hush mouth

but I haven't lost my touch

I have to get back on my job

so I can show you that

I still miss you very very much

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GucciGurl commented on I'm Back

02-11-2010

Welcome back . Glad you are writting again. We have all missed your work because you always no what to say.

MsKrystle commented on I'm Back

11-18-2009

Not straying but the space is killing me. I wanna say how I feel but my words go unspoken. Just the thought of you makes me smile, wish I could hold you in my arms for just a little while. I think I can say I found my poetic match, here's a little something for you boo welcome back ---You know I got a response for everything---

squadbuddy954

11/18/2009

this is something I indeed know

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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