Worries

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    Poem Commentary

    Just releasing my thoughts about people worrying so much we all have done it so we are all guilty

    Worries

    Always wondering how life could be

    Why? Is life not what you like to see

    Problems occur and people change

    So what  you heard your name in vein

    People come and People go

    Stop being mad jumping down people throats

    What will change beside the expression on your face

    This is what we created so this is what we face

    Bills steady going up wages staying the same

    We all wish we was back in school

    When life seemed cool

    Only concern was good grades in school

    I was a spoiled something I must say

    Looking at my lifestyle now seeing how much has changed

    Use to just pick expensive things

    because I didn't have to pay

    Now I'm checking price tags making sure its in my range

    Trying to save money to make sure my bills get paid

    within the next two days

    Worries are stressful they will make you lose your mine

    So don't sweat the small stuff just enjoy your time

    I know I will until my body can't take it and my heart draws the line

    So i smile big and proud because I refuse to let worries bring me down

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    GucciGurl commented on Worries

    02-11-2010

    Good write. Glad to see you are back. Keep writting

    bforibus commented on Worries

    12-29-2009

    my mantra for everyday life. great isnt it. to look in the face of foolishness and smile and keep walking. great job on the emotion and skill of this poem.

    squadbuddy954

    12/29/2009

    Thanks for the comment

    mistynites26 commented on Worries

    12-21-2009

    Very true and honestly written.....things have changed from since we were kids....we take on more worries just by growing up.....Wonderful write squad....look forward to reading more

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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