I'm in too deep

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I'm in too deep

When I see you my stomach tingles
I get this urge that makes me want to take you and a room and have you all to myself
I don't wanna be selfish, it's enough of you to share
If this world were mines, I wouldn't even dare!
Cause I feel you belong to me, you're apart of me.
I'm in too deep...

I work to keep you with me
However, I wonder..
Is this the way it should be?
Am I losing control?
Should I allow this power to take over me?
Am I really that far out?
I'm in too deep...

You make me feel good … Granted!
But thats a temporarily emotion
And when I'm knocked off that ride, I resent you
I guess it's all my fault.
I was warned about you
I ignored the warnings
I got attached too quickly
I'm in too deep...

But I quit you!
I DON'T WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!
This time I mean it
I no longer can take the pain of you ... Alcohol!
I know I'll probably miss that googly feeling you give me
That boost of energy and so called courage you allow me to have
But I need to depart from you cause this is taking a toll on me
I'm losing respect from my friends and my family.
They all say quit that habit, but I'm not sure if I can..
Cause you see I clearly have a issue...
I'm in too deep...

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cheohs commented on I'm in too deep

07-06-2009

I hear that, nice how you flipped it, and I know people who should take this to heart. My vice is love, that's the worst addiction ever lol.

Jume commented on I'm in too deep

06-18-2009

if there is a way in, there is always a way out. Nice confession of self struggle as I seem to feel you. Good to read stuff like this cos of the courage it brings. keep it coming

mysticmynd commented on I'm in too deep

06-16-2009

snap snap snap..., what more can I say other than there were two words that should be edited.Great job

goldenbdapoet

06/17/2009

which two words?

Romano commented on I'm in too deep

06-16-2009

DAMN I love how you switch that up, that was real and true to so many with any addiction of any kind

goldenbdapoet

06/16/2009

Thank you, I thought that would have some minds bozzled.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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