I'm Sorry

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    I'm Sorry

    I’m sorry for the flowers that I always sent
    Being a nuisance was never my intent
    I apologize for all the mushy letters
    I thought with you, I would do better
    I just wanted to show you how I feel
    To show you that love is something real
    I was simply amazed by the beauty of your eyes
    All they ever did was remind me of a sunrise
    Your smile always had me in awe
    It was the most beautiful thing I ever saw
    The problem is I always thought with my heart
    Instead of letting my head take a part
    My heart would always tell me what to do
    When my head would say, “son have you no clue?”
    I understand that love is not your thing
    Which is why I always gave you a candy ring
    One thing that I do realize is this
    You always loved me, but just with a love that does not exist
    This is why I want to thank you
    Because you inspire me to do what I do

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    Worthless commented on I'm Sorry

    10-14-2009

    Love is fake my friend! poeple just want sex, drugs and money. That's all they care about and it's sickening!!! That's why I can't wait until this world comes to an end. No more bullshit, lies, or unwanted friends...

    aggieprof commented on I'm Sorry

    03-04-2009

    With just a little more work this would easily be a 10. The rhythm is a little erratic in some places when I read it a loud. The sentiment is good and I enjoyed reading it.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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