I'm watching raw emotions

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    I'm watching raw emotions

    I'm watching raw emotions
    Even though it maybe fake
    I can stillfeel my heart as it tries not to break
    I wish you would understand but I don't think you will
    I'll conceal it inside and pretend as if nothing is new
    I love you so much but how much longer can I keep up lieing

    I'm so sick of this shit
    I'm sick of our love dying
    If ony you could feel the same way I feel about you
    We could save what love is left and have a redo
    But you haven't made any effort and therefore neither will I
    I won't be madea fool
    And I wn't cry
    A smart man once said
    No man s worth your tears
    and the one who is won't make you cry

    And I know that man was right
    And someday I'll find out why

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    papapaczki commented on I'm watching raw emotions

    12-16-2010

    "Breaking up is hard to do" comes to mind. Bummer it doesn't sound like it working out. Maybe for the best..
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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