The Beginnig

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    The Beginnig

    Time stands still
    and I'm getting to know you
    No one approves of us at all
    but you know me well too

    Drawing close for comfort
    best friends instantly
    but scary as it seems
    I know you'll fall for me

    How do I know
    You feel it too?
    'Cause there's no other way
    I could love you

    The conversations shared
    the secrets come to be
    between you and me alone
    we crave the company

    Hidden lives begins to form
    just to avoid the stares
    but life is good. We're in the clear
    ' Cause no one even cares

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    Kdaddy commented on The Beginnig

    08-27-2009

    Very nice. I like this poem, it reminds me of a forbidden love.

    lonewolf commented on The Beginnig

    04-19-2009

    good write taylor. i hope it works out

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    Alone 0
    Changes 0
    Haunted 1
    Bleeding ears (revised) 0
    Today's the day 0
    Never done 1
    Everyday 0
    This moment 1
    The end of three 0
    All that's left 0
    If 0
    What is his goal 0
    Lost you 0
    Today's Emotions 1
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    I don't know why 0
    Dying 1
    Being with you 0
    Everythings spinning 0
    I don't know 0
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    I made a deal 0
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    You say 0
    Do you? 0
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    Long day 0
    Why? 0
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    Wow 0
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    FREE! 0
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    Whe I see you 1
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    (no name yet) 6
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    Dear mom 8
    I'm always here 1
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    Killing Blow 4