impossible love

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    impossible love

     every day come and go
     make ur love more true
     but you are in your tower
    and iam just looking from below
     your eyes have magic
     charmed me from first time i sawyou
    your voice has a music
    makes me full of power
     i see you in my dreams
     every day every night
     i see you my pride
    i see with you my life
     does dreams come true
    or it is an impossible love
     do you feel what i feel
     do you hear me in your heart
     just tell me one word
    that will give me all the power
    and i will break every wall to your tower

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    SilverGirl commented on impossible love

    07-11-2009

    Wow.. this is very nice.. simple.. and ever so sweet.. what a lucky lady you have written this for.. great job.. no punctuation.. nor caps.. same as my untitled emotions.. I definitely felt the movement of your words.. and emotions in this.. great job.. Hugs.. SilverGirl

    scrye commented on impossible love

    07-11-2009

    Thank you for sharing this with us. A fine piece or artwork here. Keep writing, it only gets better and can't wait to see what else comes from you.

    wabipenache commented on impossible love

    07-11-2009

    I like this rant your words make me believe you could break every wall to the tower. wabi

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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