In My Nightmares

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  • Lost Love

    In My Nightmares
    No longer will my heart
    Yearn for you
    My mind tried to tell me
    It was to good to be true

    The love I have is gone
    Things have really changed
    I can tell our relations
    Will never be the same

    You stepped on my heart
    Shattered my soul to pieces
    This has been bottled to long
    It is time to release this

    There will be no more kisses
    There will be no more hugs
    There will be no more caresses
    There will be no more love

    I'm sorry if this is harsh
    It may seem so unfair
    But your no longer in my dreams
    You've become a nightmare

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    nlp32216 commented on In My Nightmares

    10-06-2009

    I found tis piece to be very touching..lots of meaning. I liked it ever much... Reminds me much of my niece
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    ListninEar commented on In My Nightmares

    06-03-2009

    Not bad, not bad at all! It started off a little bit mundain and like the typical lost love poem, but you pulled it off. I especially liked the last stanza. I was wondering how the title fit in and this pulled it all together nicely.
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    LeahCharde

    06/14/2009

    thank you :)

    destro commented on In My Nightmares

    02-24-2009

    Yeah!! I can't wait to cop dat poetry book- you make sure you let a brova know when it hits the press. I appreciate the read...
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    LeahCharde

    06/14/2009

    thank you so much :)

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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