in the begining

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    this was written to the one i love
    summer pooleon 

    in the begining

    The first time i saw
    you, you took my breath
    away.
    The first time you spoke to me
    i could barely talk, i wanted
    to ask you to be mine, but
    i could not find the words.
    I constantly thought of you,
    and wanted you by my side,
    then when you sked me i
    grew scared and broke your
    heart, for i did not think i
    was worthy of you.
    Seeing the pain in your eyes
    brought me stabing pains
    to my heart.
    When i worked up the
    courage and asked you to
    be mine, the world felt like
    it had paused time
    holding us in that moment,
    till i heard you say yes,
    and everything started moving again
    and i felt love run through my veins,
    because now your not only mine,
    but i am yours, i will
    always cherish and love you.
                                

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