INSIDE YOU

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    READ AND SEE FOR YOURSELF,SEE WHAT YOU FEEL, DOES THE WATER COME TO MIND

    INSIDE YOU

    INSIDE YOU

     

    I THIRST YOU

    JUST TO HAVE YOU

    AGAIN AND AGAIN

    I SEEK YOU LIKE WATER

    ANYTIME I CAN

    ONLY TO HAVE YOU

    OVER AND OVER

    I BEG TO HEAR YOU

    JUST TO HEAR YOU COO

    IF ONLY I HAD YOU

    WE WOULD DO THE THINGS WE DO

    FATHOMING MIXING OUR WATERS

    AS WE BEGIN TO WOO

    NOW THAT I HAVE YOU

    I NEED TO BE INSDE YOU

    SO WE WILL BLEND AS ONE

    I’M FEELING THE JUICES

    THE WATERS

    NINETY EIGHT PERCENT IS US, IT’S TRUE

    NOW DEEP INSIDE YOU

    I CLIMAX

    FEELING THE WETNESS

    GROWING WIYH THE PASSION

    AS WE ARE BURSTING

    AND BURSTING

    ALL COMING, ALLWATER

    SO NOW IS THE HEW

     

    Joseph A DeVoe

                                                                  8/15/09

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    badwan commented on INSIDE YOU

    09-02-2009

    love is the master mixer, mixing hearts,minds, souls, breath and blood, that if it s a true love, i mean when two means one.
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    heartmindsoul

    09/02/2009

    thank you for taking the time to do this read,what you wrote was poetry its self

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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