inside

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    inside

    Bottled up inside are the words i never said, the feelings that i hide, the lines you never read. You can see it in my eyes, read it on my face: trapped inside are lies of the past i can't replace. with memories that linger- won't seem to go away. Why can't i be happier? Today's a brand-new day. Yesterday's are over, even though the hurting's not. Nothing lasts forever, i must cherish what i've got. Don't take my love for granted for soon it will be gone. All you've ever wanted, of the love you've thought you've won. The hurt i'm feeling now won't dissapear overnight, but someday, somehow, everything will turn out all right, no more wishing for the past. It wasn't meant to be. It didn't seem to last, so i have to set him free.

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    klassik commented on inside

    07-21-2009

    this flows this just feels so right ,no bumps in the road unlike the words you write! set him free very well done, congrats

    NenaT commented on inside

    06-27-2009

    I like the rythm of this poem, and the way you acknowledge the pain without giving in to it.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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