MAYBE

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SRRY IT'S LONG, BUT IT'S THE TRUTH IN MY OPINION.

MAYBE

MAYBE I LIKE SOMEONE, MAYBE I DON'T. MAYBE I'M CRAZY, MAYBE I'M NOT. MAYBE LIFE IS SHORT, MAYBE IT'S NOT. MAYBE BEGGININGS ARE ENDINGS, MAYBE THEY'RE NOT. MAYBE LOVE IS HATE, MAYBE IT'S NOT. MAYBE LIGHT IS DARK, MAYBE IT'S NOT. MAYBE SHINY IS DULL, MAYBE IT'S NOT. MAYBE TOGETHERNESS IS LONELINESS, MAYBE IT'S NOT. MAYBE WE ARE THE GHOSTS, MAYBE WE'RE NOT. MAYBE... MAYBE.. MAYBE. MAYBE LIFE IS NOT ABOUT THE AMOUNT OF TIME IT IS. MAYBE LIFE IS ABOUT HOW AND WHOM WE SPEND THAT TIME WITH. MAYBE WE LOVE BECAUSE WE HATE. MAYBE THERE IS A LIGHT TO FILL THE DARKNESSS THAT IS THERE. MAYBE WE ARE CRAZY BECAUSE WE REALLY AREN'T. MAYBE WE HAVE FRIENDS BECAUSE WE HAVE ENEMIES. MAYBE WE ARE TOGETHER TO FILL THE LONELINESS IN OUR HEARTS. MAYBE WE ARE DULL BECAUSE WE USED TO BE SHINY. MAYBE... MAYBE.. MAYBE. MAYBE WE LIVE TO DIE. MAYBE WE LOVE TO HATE. MAYBE WE HAVE A PURPOSE FOR DYING. MAYBE JUST MAYBE WE HAVE A PURPOSE FOR LIVING. MAYBE WE HAVE A PURPOSE FOR LOVING. LOVING IS HATEING: HATEING IS DYING: DYING IS LIVING. WE LIVE TO LOVE AND HATE THEREFORE TO DIE. TELL SOMEONE YOU LOVE THEM. MAKE ONE MORE LIFE BETTER. MAKE THEM HAVE A REASON TO LIVE. I LOVE EVERYONE IN MY LIFE, THEY GIVE ME MY REASON. MY REASON TO LOVE. MY REASON TO SHINE. MY REASON TO GO CRAZY. MY REASON IN LIFE!

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NenaT commented on MAYBE

06-27-2009

You wrote this at age 5?? This is incredible. These are questions that roll around every person's mind every day of their lives....This is your "what is the meaning of life" question.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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