inspire

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inspire

inspire
let me inspire your mind
believe in youre self if nobodyelse. do everything with love and finesse.how can you live if youre downing ya self.strive to be the best even if ya lifes a mess.keep desire in ya heart stop to start accomplish one thing for you fall apart.be true to thy self if nobody else.inspire is inspiration with no seperation of color or creed family enemies just a people trying to be free.

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castlemist commented on inspire

06-19-2009

yes, it is good...I love the positive message...you might want to break the lines up to make it easier to read and puncuate the cadence.

serious commented on inspire

06-18-2009

the poem is good its true. not the most mind grabbing yet its real and simple.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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