Invisible.

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    Invisible.

    Am I invisible to you?
    I thought you would notice me..
    You stare at me as if I was a blank sheet of paper you refuse to write on..
    And when you walk pass me,
    It's like i'm nothing bust a Gust Of Wind
    I listen to your voice
    And no words come out...
    But do you see me?
    No, you don't.
    Until you do, I shall remain INVISIBLE

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Invisible.

    11-23-2010

    Great job expressing the need to be seen by others. I love the wording and the flow in this one. Great write............E

    ImpressOfLyfe

    11/24/2010

    Thank you

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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