IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

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IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

Taking my time,
    Moving too fast.

Inside the past,
   I'm taken back.

When did it start?
   Where do I begin?

If and when I try,
   to myself fix...

Take your time,
   Dont move too fast.

Dont lose your way,
   Stay on the path.

Dangers close.
   It's on your back.

It's not if...It's when,
   That it attacks.

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tynise1014 commented on IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

08-20-2010

That was good. I liked it. It was different. You just have to expand your writing skills, but only alittle bit. Keep writing:) -ty

scrye commented on IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

07-24-2009

Alot spoken with such a short amount of words. I liked it i hope you post more. Good luck on your books and congradulations.

DarrellV

07/25/2009

Thanx a lot, i'll be posting more soon...Thanx 4 coming by !

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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