It's OK (A lost love poem from the heart)

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Sorry, I know I haven't written in a while and that this one is awful and doesn't rhyme or have a rhythm, but that's what happens when you write straight from the heart, sometimes it just doesn't follow any rhyme or reason, it just comes out, ragged and broken, not even rhyming for the most part. But oh well. BTW, this is a true story for me, dedicated to my best friend Victor.

It's OK (A lost love poem from the heart)

Why don't you see me the way I see you?
I've been your best friend for so long now,
We've told each other almost everything,
The one thing I haven't told you is that,
I think I might love you,
I wish you felt the same,
But you don't love me, you have a crush on my best friend,
I see you every day, I see the way you look at her, and it kills me inside,
I know it seems like a soap opera or something, and it happens every day, 
But still I can't stop loving you, and I won't stop 'till the end,
I am invisible to you, the subject of many  Taylor Swift songs,
No one knows just how I feel, not even my 2nd best friend,
Or the people reading this poem,
And if you ever feel the same,
By then it will be too late,
Because that's what always happens, I'll get married or die or move away,
And then you might regret it, and wonder if I felt the same,
And when that happens, I hope you read this poem,
So that you will know that I love you, always have, always will,
And no matter what happens, I want you to know,
That even though you were too late...
I hope you forget about me and live happily ever after,
Knowing that it's OK.

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britt commented on It's OK (A lost love poem from the heart)

10-01-2009

i feel the exacted same way, butt, my best friend told the guy i like NOT to go out with me, and now he has a close friend of mine as a girlfriend. i understand you completely, when i read this i almost cried, because i finally found someone that feels the same way.

peacelovemusic

10/02/2009

Oh I'm sorry! That really sucks. This kind of thing is the main reason that I listen to Taylor Swift's music, because I can really relate to her songs, especially Teardrops on My Guitar, Invisible, Tied Together With a Smile, Fifteen, and You Belong With Me, listening to those songs makes me feel better because they help me know that someone else knows what I'm going through, also the main reason I like music. But yeah that's terrible! :( Some friend.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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