Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

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this is what happens when i try to help him with his h.w.

Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

"I'm going to recite,
And you're going to write it." 
That's what she said to me.

I didn't get excited,
I definetely tried to fight it,
But obviously that couldn't be.

"Try to pay attention",
She forgot to mention.
She nearly forgot what she thought.

She told me go faster.
I said to her,"Yes master".
I made a face and nearly got caught.

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cutbanksam commented on Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

02-09-2011

The life of a child explained in a short poem. At least one important aspect of such life.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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