Just a dream away

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Just a dream away

As I a young lady before going to bed
I thought I could pass on kneeling and bowing my head
To what do my wonderous dreams should appear
Angels prouching saying Jesus was near
In my dream I saw what was called the book
My name wasn't there the Lord didn't have to look
I thought to myself of the blazing fire
Saying this isn't me its not what I desire
I wanted to change my life so I went to heavens gate
But the Lord looked at me and said I'm sorry Kidd your just to late
I couldn't do nothing but turn and walk away
Saying to myself this was the day
I wanted to change please Lord let me awake
My eyes opened I knew then my life he did not take
I lived my life right I took the narrow road
For it was appeared to me in a dreamless load
So think of the new life before the last call
Remember one day "He's coming for us All!!!!

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afisher commented on Just a dream away

02-13-2009

Very nice

kid221

06/04/2009

thanks so much i will read or try to read some of others writing

southside commented on Just a dream away

02-10-2009

Very beautiful.I enjoyed reading this. Please continue to write.

kid221

06/04/2009

thank you i will write more when i get a chance and thnx again

JaLaw commented on Just a dream away

02-09-2009

Nice work! I can't wait for more. God bless. One love.

kid221

06/04/2009

sorry it has taken sooooo long to thank u 4 ur comment i haven't been on in so long i 4got my pass word...funny i can write poems but can't even remember my pass word

openminded commented on Just a dream away

02-09-2009

very nice I have been there 25 years and counting the days

kid221

06/04/2009

thank you so much sorry i didn't respond back but i haven't been on in a long time.but he lord is so good keep living 4 the him but u already know that if u have been 4 25 years

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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