Judgement Day

3 Comments

Judgement Day

It's time to meet my Heavenly Father in the sky
I didn't even get a chance to tell my family and friends goodbye
Up in heaven Saint Peter guided me to a bright light
It was my judge who wore a robe,not black but white
My judge loked at me with a great stare
I didn't know what to do I couldn't even run no where
I said wait and let me confess
My life wasn't perfect in fact it was a mess
I did answer when youknocked at the door
Even though I did back slide before
But I came to reality as I knew I had to worship thee
O.K. Lord go ahead with your plea
The judge said I know all your past so are you through
All your sins were washed away remember my son died for you
You have went through alot of trails and tribulations for me
But deep down inside you knew it would be me who would set you free
Your soul is here,your flesh is the only thing that died
You have proven yourself innocent so now you can sit by my side
What my poem is saying is will you make the Lord your way
Or already know where your going on ....Judgement Day

Poem Comments

(3)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Sx9 commented on Judgement Day

07-21-2011

we all at sometime or the other vibes about this from day one it is never good,so we write and get inspiration to make us much more acceptable to the story,judgment is never a nice talk unless u know where u are heading..

sherry122 commented on Judgement Day

05-17-2009

Very beautifully written poem.

kid221

06/04/2009

thank you 4 the comment it has been a long time since i have been on

TigerEyes commented on Judgement Day

04-16-2009

EXCELLENT POEM, VERY DESCRIPTIVE AND IT MAKES ONE REALLY THINK ABOUT ETERNITY AND THAT EVERYONE WILL FACE God at the end of life.

kid221

06/04/2009

thank you,it seems like the poem really touched you.that makes a person feels good when ur poems touch another person.especially if they change thier life to god

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

kid221’s Poems (2)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Judgement Day 3
Just a dream away 4