Just a Dream

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  • sann7
  • is extatic that happiness is not above my reach but has been in my backyard along with the flowers and weeds

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Sailing out to sea, my life changed as I had experienced a moment of reality, beauty  of the light hitting the ocean waves and the ability to be greatful for all that I was experiencing.

Just a Dream

I felt you surround me as I stood out on the bow. The strength of each onrush and its purity. A golden glow is shinning on each turn. Blue skys are exposed by white clowds given way. A beam of light coming down on each wave;  Gods finger must have touched you. Was it a dream?

I feel the cool breeze and the salty air in my hair and with the spray of each curl you kissed my face. Out of the abundance of blue sky the stars glowed with a brilliance of fire that only a creator could create. Its got to be a dream!

I made my wishes...I see your goodness. It gives me power to grow. As I see your vastness I am stripped of my inner layer and a hope comes over me and shelters my needs. I love you! And yet, was it a dream?

My reality came into focus and you slipped away. I must go now. My tears returned your kiss as they fell into you. You cradled me and gave me strength, and I cant help but feel it was all just a dream.

As I walked away, a chill came over me. I experienced for a short while the ability to see beyond myself. You touched my soul and I saw you smile. We became one; devoted to the energy of peace.

I know now I AM not a lone. And I knew then that I was indeed in a beautiful dream....

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winterkou commented on Just a Dream

02-10-2011

A beautiful poem that is well delivered and expresses the beauty of nature, the ocean , its surroundings. Loved it .

lessliketharest commented on Just a Dream

10-22-2009

spiritually beautiful......i fell into the words and my blood pressure dropped..... very peaceful...love it

Artistpoet commented on Just a Dream

09-28-2009

Sann7, I share your keen interest in thoughts about the sea.

sann7

09/28/2009

Dear Friend Artistpoet...Its a pleasure to meet you! The vastness of the ocean and its vibration will always hold my attention...Nice to see afellow lover of the nature of the waves!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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